Critiquing Amy McIntyre

"The Dry Fountain of Creativity" 

I like how she rhymes each word at the end of every line.  I think it's ironic that though she's complaining in the poem of not being able to be creative, she's being quite creative with her word choice. (Irony isn't a bad thing, I promise!)  The title is what makes it.  I really like this poem and wouldn't change anything about it.

"Heart and Mind"

I like the way the poem is set up.  It's all mid-aligned, which I think is more effective than putting it on left-align.  I like how she's saying that though one can know about love, it's not the same as actually experiencing it.  The title is appropriate for the comparison; you use your head (mind) to know about love, but you use your heart to actually experience love.  Excellent work!