Critiquing Ashlee Hooks

Poem 1

This poem is very sad, yet sweet.  I want to know who this person is.  I love how she is happily remembering this person instead of being all emo and saying "Ohhh, whyyy?  I'm sad and I'm cryyyying".  That is probably how she is feeling, but she turns the sad emotions into fond remembrances.  I like the rhyme scheme as well.

Poem 2

I can really feel the anger, confusion, and despair in this poem.  A cheating boyfriend is NEVER a fun thing to deal with, and she very effectively puts those thoughts and emotions into print here.  Though I hate cheaters, I love this poem.

Maybe a title should be added to both poems, but I wouldn't change anything else.